Just going on "looks" at the moment; it looks really nice. The characters are easy to distinguish and look like they'd be easy to write.
This ought to be part of the "Make your own script 101" course. It clearly demonstrates the importance of having particular strokes and loops repeated in various glyphs to give the whole script a coherent style and aesthetic, while showing how to give individual glyphs a touch of complexity to make reading the script less eye-straining.
Thank you Rik, that means a lot to me coming from someone as talented as you.